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People like this are the reason...

Sat Dec 6, 2008, 9:49 PM
That people think all OC's are Mary Sues. I won't name the person (She was on a different website anyway), but I will list these points that piss the hell out of me, and argue them. This is a really poorly-done Harry Potter OC, by the way.

"She has a very athletic build, and is very busty."
Too bad that having muscles (aka "athletic build") causes your breasts to get smaller.

She's not TOO athletic-looking, though.
Convenient.

"She has connections with Snape, so she can break the dress code and dress like a little whore as much as she wants and the professors can't do anything about it."
Dumbledore and McGonagal really wouldn't give a shit about your embarrassing ho of a character's connections with Snape.
If the ministry can't scare McGonagal into being nice to Umbridge, Snape can't scare her into being nice to your unruly skankbag.

"She could beat up Malfoy and Potter any day!"
No comment on Malfoy, but...
Wow. Really? She can beat up the guy that beats some variation of Voldemort every single year?

"Her parents are dead."
BIG FUCKING SHOCKER.

"She plays both Seeker and Beater on her Quidditch team."
You mean two completely opposite positions? That's convenient.

"She's tan, but not too tan."
EVEN THOUGH SHE SPENDS A DAMN LOT OF TIME IN THE SUN. OKAY.

": D Her eyes are a fantastic crystal blue."
: D Do they change colours with her mood, too?

"She's a super bad-ass."
And if she were a remotely believable character and you knew ANYTHING about the Harry Potter world, her ass would've been catapulted out of Hogwarts by now regardless of her FUCKING MEANINGLESS CONNECTIONS WITH SNAPE.


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